Thursday, 22 September 2016

This past term we have been studying poetry. We were studing

Eaten  

It wasn’t my fault
You left your lunch
Open for me to eat
I was just very hungry

You must be mad
But I am sorry
For eating your
Delicious ham sandwich

But forgive me
I was blinded
By hunger.

4 comments:

  1. Actuawwy, I weawwy wike your poem. Make more pwease, make me hungwy

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    1. Thanks man but next time can you spell please?

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  2. wow bro that is super cool bro you should be a pro bro ;)

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  3. Your poem is very good, I would've done the same thing,Isn't very much you can improve on. I've been in a similar situation

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